I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Riley, I really enjoyed reading your writing. You have used lots of interesting words and language features to create a picture in your audiences brain. Riley I am really impressed with your spelling. You have worked really hard on this and you are making progress!
Thank you Miss Harsent for saying I have interesting words and next time we do a writing like this I will try hard to use all of the language features more.
Riley, I really enjoyed reading your writing. You have used lots of interesting words and language features to create a picture in your audiences brain. Riley I am really impressed with your spelling. You have worked really hard on this and you are making progress!
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Harsent for saying I have interesting words and next time we do a writing like this I will try hard to use all of the language features more.
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